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DNF: Breath of the Titans by Riley & Sara Westbrook
Breath of the Titans
written by Riley & Sara Westbrook
published by Riley Amos Westbrook
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Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Where I stopped reading: location 64 of 771 on my smartphone
Why I stopped reading: Honestly? I hadn’t hit a chapter break yet, my eyes were tired, and I didn’t want to read any more sentences like this: “Seeing his home like that.”
I suggest the Westbrooks hire an editor. There’s no excuse for basic grammatical errors. (FYI: you’ll find a few in the book blurb too.)
What others have rated this book: There was only one review listed on Goodreads, and it was 5 stars. There were no reviews listed at Barnes & Noble or on Amazon. Just because I didn’t finish this book doesn’t mean you won’t.
About the book – from Goodreads: Breath of the Titans: Little Black Stormcloud by Riley A. Westbrook and Sara L. Westbrook is a story that centers around a half elf, half dragon boy who just turned 16, named Lovonian. The story begins with Lov and his uncle Nord taking their annual hunting trip. On their return to Elvenhom, they find that the city’s population has been slaughtered by an army of Titans, except for those taken as slaves, when they see the collection of ears that were chopped off. With Amon dead and his mother captured, Lov and Nord begin their quest to find his mother by seeking out Nord’s old friend Jaxon. After acquiring weapons and knowledge of their enemy, they set out to rescue Lov’s mother with the help of a fairy sent by Lov’s grandfather. From there, they encounter all kinds of adventures and creatures, while in desperate pursuit.
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by sonshinegreene
Thank you for an honest review. It is appreciated.
by sonshinegreene
By the way, would you please post your review to amazon and goodreads? I want honesty for people who wish to read my books.